Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in oder to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others say that these are not the only reason why someone should learn a forign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often considered by many
people
that studying an alien tongue is for travelling and job opportunities abroad.Whereas,others say that there are several grounds for knowing other mother tongues.In my opinion, going on
expedition
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improves communication skills and expand
knowledge
on
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new cultures.
First
and foremost, the motivation for learning different speech is to secure job opportunities and travel.
This
is because when on
expedition
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an expedition
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the individual will be required to communicate with the locals and
associated
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with them.
Therefore
,studying their
language
will promote smooth interaction with native speakers.
Additionally
,individuals are able to secure jobs easily if they are able to speak the vernacular speech that the locals are speaking.
For instance
,nurses are able to get jobs in France if they are able to speak french.
Thus
,alien
language
not only enables
people
to employed but
also
gives an easy opportunity for travelling.
On the contrary
,there are several
basis
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for studying different tongues,
Firstly
,it improves individual communication skills.To illustrate
this
,according to experts 80% of individuals who are multi-linguistic are good communicators and are able to interact well with the vast majority of
people
.
Secondly
,learning a different
language
expand
knowledge
of the variety of cultures available.
For example
,individuals are able to know the diversity that exists between certain cultures.
Therefore
,
people
are able to improve their communication and
knowledge
prowess. To sum up,it is relevant to have
people
study a variety of
language
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languages
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because it does not increase chances of getting new jobs but it
also
provides a
launch pad
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launchpad
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for improving individual
knowledge
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