Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Nowadays, on the shelves of any
store
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it is possible to find a great variety of
products
for every taste. Unfortunately, some of them
contains
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lots of
sugar
, which can harm our health.
That is
why some
people
strongly believe that if
a food
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food
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with a lot of
sugar
costs more, consumers will choose healthier
products
over high-costed junk food. I would say I disagree with that opinion
,
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because
such
measures will not reduce the consumption of cakes, pastries and other
sweets
in any way.
Also
,
people
with health problems sometimes need available
sugar
to maintain
level
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of blood
pressure
. To start with, modern scientists equate addiction
on
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sweets
with alcohol and nicotine addiction.
Thus
, raising the price of
sweets
will not reduce the demand for them. The proof of
this
is profit from tobacco. Despite the increase in cigarette
prices
and more and more taxes,
people
around the world continue to buy them and smoke. So the same situation might be seen with sugary corporations – no matter how high
prices
rise,
people
will not stop
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, buy and
eat
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eating
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sweets
. An increase in
prices
will only lead to the fact that
people
may begin to choose cheaper, and
therefore
less
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fewer
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quality
products
. And if the goal was to make
people
healthier,
then
it seems it turned out the opposite.
Moreover
, a lot of
people
suffer from
pressure
leaps. During the day, one person can observe both incredibly high and incredibly low pressures. There are many pills to solve
this
problem,
however
, sometimes everything happens suddenly. The easiest way to raise the dropped
pressure
is to drink tea with
sugar
or eat a chocolate bar. Raising the price of
sweets
is
a
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wrong
,
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because in
this
case
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not all
people
will be able to afford to buy something sweet, and improve their health condition. In conclusion,
in addition
to the fact that the increase in
prices
for
sugar
-containing
products
will not bring the desired effect,
sweets
can raise
the
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blood
pressure
and in some situations help.
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