Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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Nowadays, on the shelves of any
store
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it is possible to find a great variety of
products
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for every taste. Unfortunately, some of them
contains
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lots of
sugar
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, which can harm our health.
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why some
people
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strongly believe that if
a food
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food
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with a lot of
sugar
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costs more, consumers will choose healthier
products
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over high-costed junk food. I would say I disagree with that opinion
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because
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measures will not reduce the consumption of cakes, pastries and other
sweets
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in any way.
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,
people
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with health problems sometimes need available
sugar
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to maintain
level
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of blood
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. To start with, modern scientists equate addiction
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sweets
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with alcohol and nicotine addiction.
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, raising the price of
sweets
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will not reduce the demand for them. The proof of
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is profit from tobacco. Despite the increase in cigarette
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and more and more taxes,
people
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around the world continue to buy them and smoke. So the same situation might be seen with sugary corporations – no matter how high
prices
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rise,
people
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will not stop
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, buy and
eat
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eating
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sweets
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. An increase in
prices
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will only lead to the fact that
people
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may begin to choose cheaper, and
therefore
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less
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quality
products
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. And if the goal was to make
people
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healthier,
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it seems it turned out the opposite.
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, a lot of
people
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suffer from
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leaps. During the day, one person can observe both incredibly high and incredibly low pressures. There are many pills to solve
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problem,
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, sometimes everything happens suddenly. The easiest way to raise the dropped
pressure
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is to drink tea with
sugar
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or eat a chocolate bar. Raising the price of
sweets
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is
a
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wrong
,
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because in
this
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case
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not all
people
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will be able to afford to buy something sweet, and improve their health condition. In conclusion,
in addition
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to the fact that the increase in
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for
sugar
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-containing
products
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will not bring the desired effect,
sweets
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can raise
the
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blood
pressure
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and in some situations help.
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