Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

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Free-time activities are a must for everyone but for the children's it should be mandatory. It could be either educational, sports or anything else. So, I completely disagree with the statement and

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, the kids should select their hobbies by their own needs or passion.

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, sport is never counted as a time-waster in one life. In

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essay, we will discuss reasons as well. In today's world, younger people have several hobbies to choose from for their relaxation. As we all know, the freshman study for at least eight

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in one day at their educational institution.

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already enough amount of

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for education.

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, the researchers observed that scholar students or top students have at least a single sport as a hobby for their curriculum activity.

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, too many studies cause mental illnesses in pupils minds.

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of studying, one should choose sports or read in their free time. . Having on spare activity or hobby causes a lack of information in other categories as well.

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, a survey shows that undergraduates with games or reading as a hobby are likely to be more productive than kids who prefer education over a fun activity. Adding, I have experienced

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situation when I do not play or read some of the motivational books

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my mind stops working and I do not feel productive and energetic. In conclusion, students must choose spare-time activities like games, reading books rather than education as they already learning for eight

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a day and after eight

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of class if a parent wants their kids to review again in their time off

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it will totally time drain.

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, learning is

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significant for beginners life.

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