You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
About a week ago, your famous international travel magazine in its 250th edition, Published an
article
about my hometown in an effort to provide a bit of travel exposure. Unfortunately, there is a factual error in the article
which was published.
The article
, states that migratory birds arrive here in March. However
, the fact is they start to arrive in early February only. It is very important for the tourist to know because our hometown heavily relies on the spending of the tourist who comes to have a look at migratory birds.
I would like to recommend you publish a corrective article
stating that the fact published previously was incorrect or mistaken. thank you for taking the time to read my letter and for your consideration.
yours faithfully
Vrushal chotaliyaSubmitted by vrushalchotaliya2976 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite