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Some parents think it is good to have mobile phones for their children, others disagree with it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#parents #phones #children
The current smartphone brings
us
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huge convenience to our life, but
on the other hand
, it
also
 brings negative
effect
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 to us. So, many parents have the same concern about whether give mobile
phones
 to their
children
. In the following, I will discuss the advantages, disadvantages, and give my opinion. Mobile
phones
 can be a tool to help
children
 in their studies. There are many learning apps that can download on the
phone
 easily.
For example
, some app is for language learning, maths practice exercise, and dictionary. Through the colourful picture and animation,
children
 are more interested to focus to study.
Moreover
, there are many schools
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 been used mobile
phones
 in teaching and need students to discuss their assignment in the
phone
 chat group. Apart from the study, for the security problem, parents
also
 can find their kids
throughout
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phone
call
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 and knowing their
children
's location. When the danger comes,
children
 can call the police for help.
However
, there
still
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 have some negative effects on the
children
's health especially are their eyes if they spent
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many
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 time on their
phones
. Sometimes, they will easily distract by social media,
such
 as Facebook and Instagram. They might get pressured and over-worried from the number of followers, subscriptions, and likes. They will spend lesser time with their friends and family
,
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 but live in the virtual world. In summary, the ubiquity of cell
phones
 which
it
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 hard to avoid
them
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all. In my opinion, the most vital thing is parents should teach their kids how to use their
phones
 properly.
For example
, they can limit the using time and stay with their
children
 while they playing the
phone
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Mobile technology
  • parental supervision
  • safety concerns
  • educational apps
  • inappropriate content
  • cyberbullying
  • distractions
  • parental controls
  • psychosocial development
  • screen time
  • age-appropriate
  • digital literacy
  • social interaction
  • communication device
  • responsibility
  • cognitive development
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