Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many
people
support the idea that foreign tourists should be required more the charge than local citizens for important sites . In my opinion, I totally disagree this
statement because of the below reasons.
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benifits
from visitors not only come from the ticket cost but Correct your spelling
benefits
also
other resources . It is true that cultural and historical attractions which have been a long time and need to be preversed
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preserved
However
, money from the vistors
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insufficent
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insufficient
the
financial aid is the most important funding for them. Correct article usage
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Therefore
, I think the gorvernment
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government
responsable
to protect important sites, and increasing prices is a short-signed view. Correct your spelling
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Additionally
, most travellers expense a lot of money on paying for goods and services like the accommadation
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accommodation
benifits
to the tourism industry and the government.
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benefits
Secondly
, there are some reasons why the charge requirement to tourists lead to disadvantages. The first
reason is that people
feel compelling
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cultual
and historical attractions which have a favourable price. Correct your spelling
cultural
For example
, Ha Long Bay is a
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people
just need to pay for transportation cost
, many travellers come here. Fix the agreement mistake
costs
Furthermore
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in the fee location.
To conclude, I believe that we need to meet the needs of tourists so that we have more benefits from them and the important sites should have Change the spelling
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a reasonable prices
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vistors
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