Government should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In
past
time Correct article usage
the past
railways
were the main source of transportation
due to the wide network of railways
was
expanded in the whole country. One school of thought reckons that the government officials should spend more budget on Wrong verb form
being
railways
rather than constructing roads
. I completely agree with this
given notion. The facts of the thesis will be elaborated in
upcoming paragraphs.
Considered Broadly, Change preposition
on in
Railways
playing a major role of transportation
in goods or raw material as well as it also
carry
a huge number of passenger from one place to another. Change the verb form
carries
Moreover
, railways
are cheap and convient
mode of Correct your spelling
convenient
transportation
it already has wide
network of Add an article
a wide
railway
line that was mostly Add an article
the railway
a railway
contructed
in 20th century during the British rule. Correct your spelling
constructed
Furthermore
, railways
adopting latest machinery and improving the trains to run on electricity by use of advanced technology. For an instance, In India mostly trains run on coal energy but engineers improve the engines and constructed them to work on electric power. Nowadays, Indian railways
almost adopted the
electric engines.
Correct article usage
apply
In addition
, Railways
are constantly doing upgradation
in their technology field not only manufacture of railway lines is improved but Correct your spelling
up-gradation
also
it does not pollute our environment. Additionally
, the methods of constructing a new street are still an old method that is
highly
time-consuming process and Add an article
a highly
also
the preparation of raw material to make new roads
release high amount harmful gases in atmosphere
. To illustrate, nowadays if the Add an article
the atmosphere
transportation
minister says to make new roads
and railway lines, so track lines can be easily prepared with highly advanced automation and machines but on other
side construction of Correct article usage
the other
road
is too hassle process and Add an article
the road
also
harm environment
. Add an article
the environment
However
, roads
are more
busier than Change the word
apply
railways
so its
take more time Correct pronoun usage
it
Fix the infinitive
to reach
reach
from one destination to another.
To conclude, Change the verb form
reaches
railways
improvement is cheaper then
road constructionCorrect your spelling
than
as well as rail line development
is Add the comma(s)
, as well as rail line development,
also
eco friendly whereas, while road construction it releases harmful gases and takes longer time to develop.Submitted by amritpal.grewal0005 on
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