Social media badly impact our relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Base on the current technologies, we can access many social
media
.
Also
, most
people
have many accounts on different social
media
such
as
Facebook
, Instagram, Twitter, and Youtube. All social
media
are shared the main aim is to link
people
between
people
and connect to the world.
Therefore
, I can not agree that social
media
brings negative impacts on our relationships with
friends
or family. In the following, I would like to express my viewpoints on
this
statement.
First
, through social
media
, we can know-how is our
friends
doing with their
Facebook
's or Instagram's posts quickly and directly.
Also
, after we saw their post, we can leave a reply message or comment to them. Many of my
friends
love to share their daily and travel photos in their accounts. I
also
feel interested and happy about their life and I can feel a strong relationship with my
friends
.
In contrast
, sometimes my
friends
will express their emotions on social
media
such
as feels stressed from schoolwork.
Then
, I can give them some words of encouragement and support them. To me,
this
year I am doing my exchange in Finland. Social
media
is the only way for me to connect with my
friends
.
For example
,
last
week is my
friends
' birthday, I used the tools in
Facebook
to send an e-birthday card for her to celebrate her birthday.
Moreover
,
Facebook
provides a function to me that can mark all the vital days and when the day comes, it will remind me. Base on the help of
this
function, I can share my happiness with my
friends
more than the previous time.
However
, amount of
people
believe that social
media
would harm their relationships about how many followers or likes number they earn. But to me, all the numbers are not a vital part of our friendships. As
a real
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a real friend
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friends
, we need to take care of and help each other regardless of any situation.
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