A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

Dear Ana, I’ve been doing well. I was really happy to hear about your camping holiday

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summer for the

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time and am glad that you reached out to me for advice. I’ve thought about how amazing

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trip would be for you. As I’m aware of your love for nature and

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sounds to be a perfect opportunity to be closer to it.

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, it would be more fun because of the adventurous games played during camping along with the campfire and music in the evening. It is the best way to feel stress-free before starting a new course. I wanted to point out a few cons as well. You can’t access your internet due to reception issues in remote areas. if you need the internet, you have to travel towards a town and access it.

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camping sounds great, sleeping in a tent can be quite uncomfortable and we will feel sleep-deprived during the day. I’ve given it some thought and decided to tag along for

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trip. I’d be able to finish my project and be free to join you. What do you think about

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? Let me know. Can't wait to have fun times with you. Warm wishes, Farhana Jabeen

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Nov 17, 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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205 words

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serenity
outdoors
refreshing
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wildlife
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