You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

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Dear Sir / Ma'am, I am writing

this

letter to complain about the

product

I bought

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from your company. The

product

is Shein portable blender and it is used to make juices and smoothies as per the description. I saw

this

product

's advertisement online where it smoothly blends the fruits and the battery life is 5 to 7 hours. Since it is quite handy and easy to use, I bought it

last

week online.

However

, when I tried to use it for the

first

time, it

didnt

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didn't

did not

even able to blend

ripe

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banana with milk in it. Even though I charged it for the entire day before using it as per the instruction, the battery light was red and it

didnt

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didn't

blend continuously. The equipment stopped every two seconds. I am really disappointed with the

product

and I would like to return and get my money back or else if you are willing to exchange it

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the new one which is working nicely. Awaiting your positive response. Thank You. Yours faithfully,

Brijal

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Bridal

Brinjal

Dsai

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Desai

Submitted by brijal_desai on Wed Nov 17 2021

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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