Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are many bad times where
people
feel that there is nothing to proceed in a certain situation and they should accept the failure.
However
, some
people
believe that everyone should try hard to improve
such
situations. I partially agree with the latter statement because if
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little efforts of hard work is possible and it leads to success
then
why should anyone face the hard times ? On the one hand, there are humongous numbers of
people
suffering from hard times
such
as less amount of money or unsatisfactory job. Many factors are responsible for
such
a
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scenario
when there is nothing
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and a person have to accept it in order to move on in life because unacceptance will lead to stress, mental disorder and suicidal thoughts. If a senior employee working in a factory
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to perform some physical work, there can be a possibility that the employee gets failed and with low performance could lose the job. The person is the most experienced employee of the factory some impossible tasks need to be accepted as unfeasible.
On the other hand
, Some
people
believe that nothing is impossible. They think that if we face a failure
then
there might be a possibility that we have not tried harder enough so, using
this
ideology the
people
try harder and harder until they do not succeed.
For example
, a gym freak would keep on working out till he reaches the goal. Using
such
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stress, mental
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can be tacked as all the focus would be on trying hard and there will not be any thoughts of
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. In my conclusion, it might
also
be true to accept the failure if the situation is impossible because there can be some medical danger. It is
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evident
event
that our
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priority
should be our health and if a bad
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situation
is doable
then
we should keep on trying and never give up.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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