Essay topics: An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. write a letter to your friend In your letter * say how you feel about the visit * suggest what you could do on his/her birthday *try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea

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Dear Jenna, I’ve been doing really well. I am actually very excited about your visit to India as it’s been a long time since we met in person. So, I am planning to make the most of it in making

this

trip a memorable one for us with lots of shopping, short trips across cities and delicious food. As I know that your birthday will be here in India, I’ve decided to do something special for you.

First

, we’d start our day with some shopping in a local market which is famous for authentic and hand-made items followed by a small feast by my mother as she insisted on having a soiree with a few of my friends to celebrate your day. In the evening, we could go for a long drive exploring more places in the city. What do you think about

this

plan? Let me know if there is anything

in particular

that you would like to do here. I’d be more than happy to arrange that for us. See you at the airport! Warm wishes, Farhana Jabeen

Submitted by jabeenfarhana9 on Wed Nov 17 2021

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