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Many People like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or bad thing?

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Today youth are following and wants to wear trendy clothing because of the different brands that are getting attracted by all ages without gender difference. In my opinion,
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 believe that
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further
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trend
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,as they are more marketing strategies that
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an
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 crucial role in buying accessories which are useful in daily needs.
For instance
,advertisements on products that are useful
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 customers to buy goods from customised branded shops.
However
,
this
 can be an advantage for the owner of the product as
this
 can give them profit for their business.
Secondly
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 between generations
also
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 on wearing
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 style of jeans. To
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illustrate
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combination
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 of
shirt
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shirts
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 with
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branded jeans always tends to purchase
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various clothes.
Moreover
,to obtain these desires they will find
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 online stores as it is
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 easy way of shopping
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virtually.
Finally
,consumers
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 and wants on that particular fashion without any age difference,younger and even older generation are tending to buy products because of the brands and strategies of clothing merchants.
On the other hand
, strategies
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 are played by the stores is one of the
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 that
are
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 used by product owners because
this
 is the only way they can earn profits of
business
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the business
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.
However
,attracted customers are using various resources that are being offered by
product
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manager
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. Agencies are
also
 attracting consumers by giving offers
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as discount
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discount
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,
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online coupons,flyers because
this
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customer satisfaction. To conclude,I believe that wearing fashion trends whether it is formal or informal depends upon the particular person's interest and ability to get attracted
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marketing
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 mix of products.
However
,people can choose of selecting clothes depending upon the situation and culture they are obtaining.
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