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You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think your current place of residence is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague. Explain why you are shifting out Describe your accommodation Explain why it is suitable for your friend

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I heard from Sonia that you have found a job in Chandigarh. Congratulations on getting
such
 a good workplace. Unfortunately, I ought to shift to Jalandhar
this
 month.
Consequently
, I shall not be able to meet you. My company gives me a promotion and a transfer. So, I have to move by the end of December. The flat in which I have been dwelling since 2019 is very amazing. The landlord is quite nice and provides me multifarious facilities,
such
 as a gym, a swimming pool, a parking slot for a car and so on.
Moreover
, my apartment is two BHK and rent is
also
 superb nominal. Every room is installed with electronic equipment like a LED, a down celling etc. So, I would suggest you
to
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move here after I leave. You could sign a lease after you move here. I can ask my house’s owner to hold the house for you.
Furthermore
,
this
 rental home would be very beneficial for you.
This
 is mainly because it is situated in the centre of the town so your office as well as grocery stores are very close and can be approachable effortlessly. I would appreciate it if you could accept my suggestion. In case you decide to stay in the rental home, please let me know so that I can talk to my landlord about it. Yours faithfully, Prabhjot Kaur
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