Governments should spend money on rails rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Governmental
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The governmental
A governmental
budget
should be invested on rails
rather roads
by official authorities. I believe that allocating money for establishing or developing Change preposition
than roads
roads
is more important than rails
.
On the one hand, railway
system needs special infrastructure Correct article usage
the railway
such
as rails
and wagons as well as enough space to set them. Therefore
, it cannot be used all over the country especially in high hills or mountain region
.So, the route which is covered by train could be limited. Fix the agreement mistake
regions
Besides
due to cost
of maintaining and expanding the system, it is not economical to use it in small cities or remote areas with few commuters.
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the cost
On the other hand
, developing roads
needs less budget
rather than rails
therefore
it is more accessible for the governments especially in the poor or even underprivileged countries. It means that with less budget
, it could be possible to cover more areas with roads
and many people can access to
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apply
this modes
of transport. Change the determiner
this mode
these modes
Additionally
, in busy cities like metropolitan, because of space limitation
, there is Fix the agreement mistake
limitations
no
enough space to set the infrastructure for railway systems so it is more beneficial to establish a road in noisy cities. Meanwhile, Correct your spelling
not
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the road
road
can be used by different kinds of Fix the agreement mistake
roads
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the vehicle
a vehicle
vehicle
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vehicles
such
as car
, bus and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
truck
which means that a large number of people and companies benefit from Fix the agreement mistake
trucks
roads
compare
to Wrong verb form
compared
rails
.
In conclusion, from Add an article
an economical
the economical
economical
point of view, Replace the word
economic
budget
which is allocated on Add an article
the budget
a budget
roads
can be more beneficial both for people and companies because with less money and infrastructure government
can establish more Correct article usage
the government
roads
that can cover all around a country from mountain
region to remote area.Correct article usage
the mountain
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
