Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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life if full of care and we have no time to stand and stare? But the idea of rejuvenation differs from person to person. A few people like to pursue their hobbies like painting, singing or reading in their free time while some others prefer to meditate and give themselves the much-needed emptiness of thoughts.
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, there are ashrams in India that encourage people to join their monthly camps which offer guidance regarding both yoga and meditation.
All in all, it depends on an individual's idea of what relaxation means to him. It can work either by means of pursuing hobbies or giving total rest to one's mind. In conclusion, a break is an absolute necessity in whichever form is possible.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite