Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, disappearing
languages
are more and more, and every year some of them are totally destroyed. Some people believe that these
languages
are not very important,
furthermore
, it will be easier to live even without them. I totally agree with
this
statement
,
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and will explain why I think so in
this
essay. The main reason why are
languages
dying is - unnecessary among the folks. Reasons
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unnecessary can be very different
such
: another
language
is better for communication or more information can be taken from another
language
.
Prime
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example of
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language
is
Latin
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language
. These were very popular in Europe
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medieval times.
However
, there came other
languages
which are easier to learn, sounds better and have more grammatical range.
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the end,
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Latin
replaced
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by English, French, and another European lexicon.
Moreover
, now English is the major world
language
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of
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people together. The
second
argument is the data exchange between cultures. In the world, we have
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many Great minds in various parts of the Earth. And It will be easier if they
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together in one standard
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. Imagine, if one of the scientists
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in
almost
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dead
language
.
This
issue would interfere to create totally free and convenient communication. In conclusion, I wanna say that
this
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standardization and simplifying anything, and in my
opinion
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this
is right.
Language
can be
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a barrier
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between
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people. Nowadays,
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should not worry about
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this
matters. Humanity has more important hardships.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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