Climate change is an urgent issue and it is believed that the utilization of fossil fuels should be stopped and alternative energy resources should be used instead. It is however believed that oil, gas, and coal are indispensable. What is your opinion? Support your point of view with relevant example

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In these years, frequently changing weather conditions pose a serious threat to the ecosystem. While some people argue that we have to use renewable

energy

sources

and reduce the utilisation of coal, oil, and gas whereas others claim that

such

gases are necessary for our survival. I personally believe that usage of natural

energy

sources

like wind, solar and hydroelectric definitely help us to combat the detrimental impacts of global warming.

This

essay will support my opinion with relevant examples in detail.

Firstly

, alternate

energy

sources

are environmentally friendly.

This

means to say that consumption of

such

resources does not emit toxic fumes to the atmosphere which in turn increases the temperature of the global atmosphere.

For instance

, it has been reported by 2050, usage of fossil fuel may increase the average global temperature by 1.4 to 5.8 degrees.

In addition

, industrialization has become a primary aspect in many developing countries where they are not considering the negative effects on our planet.

As a result

, the world may encounter catastrophic consequences in terms of natural calamities

such

as rising sea levels, tsunami etc.

Secondly

, the availability of oil and coal are not enough to meet the future demand.

This

is because

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people overconsumed these resources to meet the daily living requirements.

For example

, most automobiles are increasingly using non-combustible gases and it has been reported that 75% of air pollution is caused due the release of greenhouse gases that are emitted from cars and buses.

Moreover

, solar and wind

energy

are abundant and available in the long run.

Consequently

, we can protect our environment from significant impacts. To conclude, in my opinion, reusable

energy

sources

are vital for a clean and safe environment for living beings to live a long and healthy life as well as to protect our earth from negative consequences like global warming.

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