Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.?
It has been debated that some
people
believe that it is a good way
to accept a bad circumstances
like getting unsatisfaction Correct the article-noun agreement
bad circumstances
a bad circumstance
in
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with
job
or Correct article usage
a job
capital
shortage while others think that it is better to endeavour to escape from Correct article usage
a capital
such
situations. This
essay will examine both points of view and argue in favour of the latter.
One
the one hand, accepting a difficult Correct your spelling
On
situation
would prevent from
depressions or doing somethings Change preposition
apply
which
can be problems to them. Most Correct pronoun usage
that
people
will experience with
problems or bad conditions in their lives but they have to overcome Change preposition
apply
properly
without doing any regrettable mistakes. Correct pronoun usage
them properly
For example
, people
are unable to make right
decision when they are in deep trouble and they may decide wrongly and it leads them to happen another problem. Add an article
the right
As a result
, they will be depressed and lack of self-confidence to live in the world. That’s why it is a
best Change the article
the
way
by accepting a bad situation
in order to release unnecessary stress and to avoid extra problems.
On the other hand
, endeavouring to improve the bad conditions is more
effective Add an article
a more
way
to escape from troubles and it makes more self-confidence. In other words
, there is
no Change the verb form
are
people
who do not experience difficult situations in their lives in this
world and the greatest way
is finding out how to solve problem
systematically to get a good condition. Add an article
the problem
For instance
, if a person who
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apply
face
Change the verb form
faces
a
shortage Remove the article
apply
money
, he or she needs to do more works to end meet like doing extra hours or one or two more jobs to get more money. Change preposition
of money
Similarly
, if we don’t get job Fix the agreement mistake
satisfaction
satisfactions
Correct your spelling
satisfaction
then
we need to search other
jobs or we have to searchChange preposition
for other
a
Change preposition
for a
way
to get satisfaction in work.
To sum up, it is partially true that embracing a difficult situation
such
as insufficiency of money or undesirable jobs. Nevertheless
, in my opinion, I believe that seeking out solutions in order to improve such
situation
is a proper way
and it makes people
be more self-confident to live in the word.Submitted by sandarmyint740 on
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