Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. discuss both these views and give your own.

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A group of
people
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agree that dealing with bad situations like a failed
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or a financial issue is the best way. While another group of them believe that hard-working to improve that situation might be a better way. Personally, I'm with the 2nd group.
People
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cannot do anything for something which is happened in the past. It's gone and it won't turnover. So, it's more useful to accept it and stop thinking about it.
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, when
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had failed at the stock exchange in Iran, they had given up and decided to deal with it. In another word, doing the wrong
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for 2nd time is harmful to not only the person who decided to do it but
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to others who like to follow that
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. Because they tend to repeat whatever others do in that area.
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,
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circle will go on and a lot of
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will disappoint just like youths in Iran.
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,
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can learn from their unsatisfactory
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or failed exams. They can find out what was wrong with their
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.
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, they would solve it and improve their
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and find the best way to do it.
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, they would succeed in their major.
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, when students fail at exams in their school they tend to
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harder to pass that exam. In conclusion, there are
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who have a tendency to stop doing their
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when they face a fail. Others including me prefer to try so much until they succeed at that
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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