Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. why do you think people waste food ? what can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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people
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are very careless about
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wasting. Nowadays, individuals bought more
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they are willing to consume. It
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enhances the wastage of
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bought from restaurants and shops.
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of reasons that why
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are wasting
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as well as some actions should
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be taken to prevent
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pupil's from wasting. The facts of the thesis will be demonstrated in the following paragraphs. Considered broadly,
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is the
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and foremost source of energy for humans but nowadays
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are ordering
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their consuming capacity. It is happening due to individuals have no estimated idea about their own diet
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enough
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which they are not able to eat and
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extra
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makes
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way towards the dustbin. For
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example, a person who has
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a hunger
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of
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two pizza slices but when he looks for ordering a pizza. It contains three slices. So, he has to order the extra slice because the quantity of the slices in one pizza should not be reduced.
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, some
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are
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over eating
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overeating
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and more them some are wasting edible eating stuff.
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, there are lots of prevention techniques which may help in reducing the wastage of eating stuff.
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,
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can give
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extra
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needy ones like beggars. Meanwhile, they can
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serve
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food
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to their pet and stray animals. For an instance, in
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50% of
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new born
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stray puppies were died due to malnutrition in 2019. It was not the perfect data but some researchers made it by observation and assumptions.
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,
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can
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set their diet that how much they have to eat as well as it can
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prevent them from wasting eating supplements. To conclude, some major health organisations should
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put a step forward to solve the problem of
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wasting thereby
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can
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become aware
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this
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, authorities can
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implement several rules that
decreases
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the wastage of
food
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