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In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#study #university #students #tuition #fees #people #education
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In the contemporary era, there is a heated argument over the issue that
academies
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 finance costly
tuition
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fees
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. A little bit of students affords them. Others
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 think university
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 should be unoccupied for the public. A lions-share of society favours it.
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, the rest go awerse it, the following paragraphs would highlight my personal perspective along with costly
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fees
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 and free
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. I see eye to eye with the central idea for various reasons
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 and foremost
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 in public Basic need. Many
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 do not continue their studies because of financial issues,
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, in India and , other low economical countries
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 suffer
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 problem because their family do not manage their
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fees
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.
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, the government should put their best and help every financial issue suffer
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.
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, some
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 should provide free
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, but not all individuals. academy inquire
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 who mainly suffer financial issues. Above some
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 think academy provides free
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 for all, it's not possible because university management generates income throw by
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fees
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. Expensive
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fees
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 many students can not afford, lots of
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 charge yearly high
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fees
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. I think
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 give
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 chances for scholarships
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 discount offers provide for low-income family students. Hammering the
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 nail. I am of the opinion that disagrees because
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 run and manage by generating income. I think the ministry and individuals both help
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. ministry should build public
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 and proved free
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. In the end,
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 is our basic need, its responsibility totally in our
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 and ministry. I believe if all
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 are educated it's better for our
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education
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people
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 grow
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 economy and represent our
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 to worldwide
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