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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion

#people #men #women #job #jobs
It is assumed that there should be no sexual
descriminatin
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discrimination
 for a profession ,
although
 some people
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belive
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that
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believed that
woman's
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women
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 cannot do
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specific
specefic
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career
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. I consider that
women
 and men do not have any
diffrences
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differences
 in order to do their jobs. I will discuss the reasons in
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To begin
 with ,as
women
's
role
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 are vital among
family
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families
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,
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they
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 role in society cannot be neglected they are able to be
perosperous
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prosperous
 at their own social status and go up to the ladder of success by a managed scheduled program in life .
for instance
, they bring up their children , train them and managing their households
in addition
 to working long hours cannot
be possibly happen
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 unless with a managed scheduled timing table
Moreover
, most of the
women
 who are lonely responsible for the financial section in
family
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the family
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 need to hire at a career which
require
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 her family's need and if the
less
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 jobs become available for them unemployment in the society for these
women
 will
occured
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occurred
occur
 .
In addition
, since
women
 are considered as
second
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 gender in many societies
such
 as
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 ,
saudia
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arabia
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 they cannot show their best in order to
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loose
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 their confidence .
for example
 , in
iran
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Iran
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 some people think that a woman cannot be a taxi driver and doing these
job
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jobs
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 for
women
 may be ashaming
therefore
,
women
 prefer to stay at home and refuse to do
this
 career due to lack of
confidense
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confidence
 and feeling uncomfortable. To sum up, as
women
 and men are similar to do
any
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 jobs and no sex
descriminiaton
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discrimination
 should not be in society . If the
women
 managed their time and have self
confidance
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confidence
 they can get promoted in
evey
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every
 profession like men.
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