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The end of the world's fossil fuel resources and the subsequent changes will be a positive development in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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I completely agree
to
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 the statement that the end of the world’s fossil
fuels
 will have a positive impact on society. According to my positive development in society means harmonization in the home which means peace in the world. Which will happen by either putting a ban on usage of the fossil fuel or by its extinction. There is a number of reasons which can substantiate the answer. Usage of fossil
fuels
 leaves an environmental footprint which affects the ecosystem
this
 happens especially with industries like petrochemical industries
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non-renewable
energy
 like coal and petroleum to fuel their boilers and machinery to extract the desired product after which they dispose of the untreated
water
 into the
water
 stream which affects the quality of the
water
 and in ,
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 localities are affected by it after consuming it. Despite knowing that
this
 is unlawful they don’t want to treat the
water
 before releasing it to the ecosystem in order to save the extra cost.
In addition
 to
this
 extracting fossil
fuels
 demands for natural habitats to be eradicated especially forests which is home to many species,
as a result
 endangering their lives. Many off-shore reservoirs are built which pollutes the ocean and in
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 affects the flora and fauna in it. As a
,
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result there have been many consequences to these actions increasing the average temperature of the world to 3
degree
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 Celsius which is the sole reason for to rise of the sea level
thus
 reducing the landscape for human habitats. All
this
 could be put to rest when we stop using fossil
fuels
. We could rather harness renewable
energy
 like solar
energy
, wind
energy
 and
water
energy
 which is safe, effective and will reduce pollution to a greater extent. There has been a lot of scientific advancement in the areas of renewable
energy
 utilization which are cost-effective and safe.
Thus
, we could proudly say that end of the world’s fossil fuel resources will definitely have a positive impact on society.
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