Some people think that government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Education
has been the most important part of life and
government
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plays a vital role to ensure
education
to
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every child. Some people think that
education
is the right of all citizens and it should be provided at no
cost
at primary
level
, secondary
level
and university
level
while other people think that the
cost
of
education
at
university
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the university
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level
should be paid by
students
. Free
education
will give easy access to every netizen, who wants to get educated at any age.
This
will
definately
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definitely
increase the
litracy
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literacy
rate.
As a result
, more jobs will be created and
economy
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the economy
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will boom and that makes a nation stronger.
However
, as per saying " there is no free lunch in the world."
This
shift can increase the
economy
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burden of a country that could
leads
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to a disastrous situation of a country.
For example
, Canada provides free
education
until grade 12 and
therefore
education
budget has been increasing every year to
accomodate
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accommodate
the
cost
of every
school going
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child
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.
The paid
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Paid
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education
brings responsibility and focus.
Students
who pay gigantic tuition
fee
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fees
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, know that
,
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they have to study at any
cost
to cover up that
education
loan.
Therefore
,
success
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the success
a success
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rate of getting
job
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a job
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after graduation is higher than those who study at
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an institution
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institution
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institutions
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with no fees. The value of money, they engross will inherit
to
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by
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their kids.
For example
, pharmacy
students
in Canada take loans for their
education
and pay later once they become pharmacists. So, they know, they need to study hard to become pharmacists. To conclude, university
education
should not be free and
students
should pay for their higher
education
. It brings
the
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sense of responsibility and accountability that will help to grow
economy
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the economy
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of a nation while free
education
put more burden on the government.
As a result
, the government will increase the tax system and eventually goods will be sold at exorbitant prices.
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