Some people think that government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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has been the most important part of life and Use synonyms
government
plays a vital role to ensure Correct article usage
the government
education
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to
every child. Some people think that Change preposition
for
education
is the right of all citizens and it should be provided at no Use synonyms
cost
at primary Use synonyms
level
, secondary Use synonyms
level
and university Use synonyms
level
while other people think that the Use synonyms
cost
of Use synonyms
education
at Use synonyms
university
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the university
level
should be paid by Use synonyms
students
.
Free Use synonyms
education
will give easy access to every netizen, who wants to get educated at any age. Use synonyms
This
will Linking Words
definately
increase the Correct your spelling
definitely
litracy
rate. Correct your spelling
literacy
As a result
, more jobs will be created and Linking Words
economy
will boom and that makes a nation stronger. Add an article
the economy
However
, as per saying " there is no free lunch in the world." Linking Words
This
shift can increase the Linking Words
economy
burden of a country that could Replace the word
economic
leads
to a disastrous situation of a country. Change the verb form
lead
For example
, Canada provides free Linking Words
education
until grade 12 and Use synonyms
therefore
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education
budget has been increasing every year to Use synonyms
accomodate
the Correct your spelling
accommodate
cost
of every Use synonyms
school going
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school-going
child
.
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,child
The paid
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Paid
education
brings responsibility and focus. Use synonyms
Students
who pay gigantic tuition Use synonyms
fee
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fees
,
they have to study at any Remove the comma
apply
cost
to cover up that Use synonyms
education
loan. Use synonyms
Therefore
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success
rate of getting Add an article
the success
a success
job
after graduation is higher than those who study at Add an article
a job
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an institution
institution
with no fees. The value of money, they engross will inherit Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
to
their kids. Change preposition
by
For example
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students
in Canada take loans for their Use synonyms
education
and pay later once they become pharmacists. So, they know, they need to study hard to become pharmacists.
To conclude, university Use synonyms
education
should not be free and Use synonyms
students
should pay for their higher Use synonyms
education
. It brings Use synonyms
the
sense of responsibility and accountability that will help to grow Correct article usage
a
economy
of a nation while free Correct article usage
the economy
education
put more burden on the government. Use synonyms
As a result
, the government will increase the tax system and eventually goods will be sold at exorbitant prices.Linking Words
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