Natural resources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

In the contemporary era, unrenewable
resources
are reached their lowest level. The issue of deficits of
natural
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deposit is widely debated in the world today, with some
people
claiming that two major consequences
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to be. There are several reasons for
this
, but
also
a number of measures we can take. One of the causes of the problem is that
a
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war for territory amongst the well-developed
countries
and
third
ones might start, meaning that not only
resources
quantity will decrease, but
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also
.
For example
, China has problems with
water
supply, and
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the
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nearest
neighbors
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Mongolia and Kazakhstan
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danger because of in the case of shortage, China with its huge population can easily take
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power over those
countries
. Kazakhstan is reach of natural
resources
,
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and has all elements from
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table, which means that for the
next
decade its nation would not see any deficits in
use
.
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another issue is that some
countries
population
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and species would die abnormally, just because of
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supply of
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resource
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.
For instance
, Zambezia’s population decreased
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40% in comparison with 5 years ago, due to not enough clean
water
for
people
, with result that thirty and disease took
people
’s lives. Regarding potential solutions, probably the immediate step would be
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use
of
resources
by governments.
This
could be done through national education of
people
on how to economy
water
, electricity and not greedily buy food that would not be eaten to cure
this
problem.
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result in helping the environment on the demand-suppose relations, and England is a great illustration of it, where
people
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the
water
flow while brushing their teeth to economy
water
.
Furthermore
, another possible remedy
may be
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implementing the
use
of advanced technologies worldwide, especially in the
countries
where the ability
of drinking
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clean
water
will become normal for
people
. A station with cleaning
water
from Tesla to African suburbs is exempli gratia, which lead that
people
and animals
are now become
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healthier and happier. In conclusion, the main problems with
shortage
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of natural
resources
associated with future war and extinction of living beings can be solved through adequate
use
and modern technologies. There is not only certain bodies should care about
this
matter, but
also
whole
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Earth planet livers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • non-renewable resources
  • economic instability
  • water shortages
  • agricultural production
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable management
  • conservation
  • alternative energy
  • afforestation
  • reforestation
  • water conservation
  • responsible consumption
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