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Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past. Describe some advantages or disadvantages of television for children

#children #time #television
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Nowadays, there is no doubt that
children
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 want to watch
television
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 more than before.
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, watching
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 of
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also
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 has advantages and disadvantages that people should consider properly. I will explain both of them in the
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 paragraphs. One of the benefits of
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 for
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 today is that there are a lot of more attractive images, sounds and motions in
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 programs.
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, when
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 see them, they can develop their worldview and improve their creative thinking more than only reading the textbooks. From my experience, when my son views TV shows for kids
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 as the life of animals, cartoons,
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 he has more creative questions and creates more imaginary stories to tell with his friends.
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 is a good thing for developing
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’s imagination.
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, when
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 spend more time watching
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, they will have many drawbacks for their health. One of the health issues is that it causes
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’s eye problems.
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,
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 will be nearsightedness or farsightedness or astigmatism, so that they can not see clearly at an early age. In my case, my nephew usually watches the small screen for over 8 hours every day,
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 he was nearsighted from 6-year-olds.
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 is obviously not good for him. In a nutshell, watching
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 has both advantages and disadvantages for
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. To leverage the benefits, I think parents should keep their eyes on monitoring the watching time of
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 that
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 should watch
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 programs less than 2 hours every day and have an interval interruption every 15 minutes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational programs
  • diverse cultures
  • entertainment options
  • language skills
  • critical thinking
  • social awareness
  • shared experience
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • inappropriate content
  • academic performance
  • attention problems
  • social skills
  • commercial influence
  • addiction
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