The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line graph compares the proportion of three household electrical devices over the period of 99 years, and the
second
chart shows the Linking Words
time
spent on domestic work per Use synonyms
week
from 1920 to 2019.
It is evident that after 2000, the figure for refrigerators and vacuum cleaners rose to a peak of 100% that nearly every family owned these two devices. We can Use synonyms
also
see a decreased trend Linking Words
for
the Change preposition
in
time
spent on Use synonyms
housework
between 1920 and 2019.
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According to
the first line chart, the ownership of refrigerators was negligible in 1920, and the number of vacuum cleaners was the highest at approximately 40%. Linking Words
However
, just in 40 years, the number of washing machines overtook vacuum cleaners as the primary Linking Words
households
appliances. Change the noun form
household
By contrast
, the figure for washing machines steadily increased from about 30% to 100% between 1920 to 2000.
Looking at the Linking Words
second
graph, between 1920 and 2019, the Linking Words
time
spent on Use synonyms
housework
fell from nearly 50 hours per Use synonyms
week
to 10 hours per Use synonyms
week
. There was a rapid decrease from 1920 to 1960 that reduced almost 30 hours per Use synonyms
week
for doing Use synonyms
housework
. After that, the Use synonyms
time
spent on Use synonyms
housework
underwent several highs and lows, and Use synonyms
finally
decreased to merely 10% in 2019.Linking Words
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