More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information, therefore there is no need to print books, magazines and newspapers on paper. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people use laptop computers, tablets and
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smart phones
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to get knowledge faster and easier rather than reading paper documents. Some people think that there are disadvantages, whereas others believe that it is not good completely. In my opinion, I partially agree with accessing
information
from electric devices rather than books, magazines or newspapers. Clearly, there are numerous reasons why it has merits of gaining
information
from laptop computers.
Firstly
, it is good for the environment. Recently,
the
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deforestation worsens because of an increase in making many pieces of paper. By using the electric documents,
this
issue can be better than now.
Moreover
, it is time-saving.
For example
, if a student uses
electric
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dictionary rather than searching on
paper
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dictionary, it will be a saving of time, strength and even money.
Nevertheless
, there are
also
drawbacks
of
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using electric devices rather than books.
First
of all, it can be not totally correct
information
. There are some websites that we do not know well whether it contains certified
contents
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or not.
Thus
, it can be difficult to recognise exact resources.
In addition
, it can affect enormous employment positions about publishing. There are many posts of making books, magazines and newspapers.
However
, if the public only
use
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computers for accessing
information
,
it
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can occur a decrease
of
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publishment
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employees. In conclusion,
although
it is a good way for the environment and a decrease of the time-consuming, it is unavoidable that getting difficulty of finding exact
information
and declining the number of employees in the publishment industry.
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