Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others.
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awe-inspiring moment, when and where I realized I could be so much more, more than just any ordinary girl with ordinary hopes and aspirations, was when I topped my school during my 10th Board Examinations, with a score of 489 out of 500, securing 98.6%. Now, when I laid my eyes on my scorecard for the first time, it didn'Use synonyms
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strike me as an exceptional catch because deep down, I knew I could've been better. But, if you're anything like me, you'd want to see that glint of happiness somersault in your parents' eyes and hear the euphoric voices of your grandparents (and family, in general). That was exactly what happened back home, on the 15th of July, 2020, the day I was convinced that my efforts meant something. But, overshadowing all the praises and the flowery, sugar-coated compliments, Use synonyms
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, everything that we yearn so much for is that feeling of self-worth and that sense of accomplishment; we want to love and we want to be loved, all by chasing these shape-shifters we call fame', 'stardom', wealth', 'success'. And that sense of self-worth rose to prominence the day I created an impact. Now, I know, in the eyes of the Use synonyms
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brought about change in a thousand lives, but to know that I, as an individual, have proved myself just made it rosier. (And I definitely aspire to inspire change someday). I was being heaped with appreciation from so many people that I didn'Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite