School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? what is your opinion.

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Nowadays

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Nowadays

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, children spend one-

thirth

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third

of day

time

in

school

with

teachers

. Children not only

gaining

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knowledge from teaches but

also

learning

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social

skills

from them in

school

. In the modern era,

parents

have to work during weekdays and

may

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lack

of

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time

of being with their

kids

. I agree with the statement that

school

teachers

are standing in a more important position than

parents

in the development of social and intellectual for

kids

. One of

pricipnal

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principal

reason is that

school

teachers

are trained so as to teach

students

of social

skills

or knowledge. During the

time

of studying

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education degree or master,

teachers

are requested to learn the latest theory or mindset for education.

In other words

,

teachers

are

fimilar

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familiar

with how to use different tools or ways to enhance the social and intellectual development of

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the kid

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kid

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kids

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.

For instance

, using the words that

students

can

undstand

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understand

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student

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students

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can experience the real world or organising extra-

circulam

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circular

activities that

sutdents

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students

are able to know from fault. In general,

parents

do not equip the mentioned skillsets for teaching

kids

since they have to work during weekdays.

Therefore

,

teachers

are well prepared to teach

students

so as to enable

kids

to develop their social and

intellecutal

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intellectual

skills

.

Besides

,

parents

may lack

of

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time

for teaching their

kids

of

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social and

intellecutal

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intellectual

skills

while

teachers

are employed

as

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fulltime

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to do so. In general,

parents

have to work for daily expenditure and they may don't have enough

time

for teaching their kid. For

teachers

, they are paid for the position and they equip energy and skill for teaching them. To conclude, I agree that

teacher

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are more responsible for

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the social and intellectual development of

students

than

parents

do since they are well trained for teaching

students

and they are working for

this

purpose. For the

parents

, they are busy with working and

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not

studied

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for teaching

kids

.