Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Other think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People
argue that being a teenager is the happiest times
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time
for
most Change preposition
in
people
's life
. Others suggest that people
will be happier when they are adults due to their capacity. In this
essay, reasons
Correct article usage
the reasons
of
both sides will rise and my justification will be provided afterwards.
To start with, Change preposition
for
people
believe that kids live without pressure and so they can enjoy life
during that period. Since parents take care of their children, they spend most of their time in
studying and playing. Because of that, kids don't have to concern their living. Change preposition
apply
For instance
, teenagers do not have to worry about paying for bills, rent or debt. As a result
, it is possible for teenagers to focus on what they love only, like studying or playing sports.
On the other hand
, adult life
can be more meaningful with the
sense of satisfaction. In general, Correct article usage
a
people
have to work so as to earn money to survive. When adult succeeds in their work, they are praised by colleagues and friends. Therefore
, they can find their
joy in their work step by step and eventually they will gain a sense of satisfaction. With the sense of success, adults are able to develop their self-achievement. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Consequently
, they will enjoy their life
and find their own happiness.
To conclude, the argument of adult life
provides more happiness proven
that self-achievement is essential for human beings. Add a missing verb
has proven
In contrast
, some people
believe that teenagers life
earn more happiness due to lower living pressure. I agree that self-achievement is playing a major role in our life
since it can satisfy our souls.Submitted by aaron on
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