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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

#people #community #service #part #school #programmes #charity #neighborhood #sports #children
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 will shed the light on the positive rule of
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Teenagesrs
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Teenagers
 had to feel responsible, and nothing better, in my opinion, than encouraging them to
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offering
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that helping
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others might
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. And
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 play
this
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such
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Although
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 obligatory assignment might lead to the unpleasant feeling of
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freedom of choice,
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 the aiding mission. Adolescents require to get involved in public services in order to get ready to endure the futuristic responsibilities of being parents and to better
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 job.
Socities
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Societies
 and communities ,
also
, might need some urgent services. In case of a natural disaster , disease outbreak,
for instance
 , eventually high
school
 students as a standby aiding force would be ready to help instantly, and
this
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community
 service was a compulsory part of the pupils' curricula.
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 money that might be paid for development projects. In conclusion, unpaid
community
 service performed by adolescents at high
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obligatory learning session as it plays a crucial
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 in preparing the youngsters to be good citizens
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