You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Respected Sir/Mam, I'
m
John and I'
m
a student in
this
college. I recently availed myself of a
room
for myself in college to focus on my thesis. But ,
currently
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I'
m
facing an issue making my stay here in the
room
difficult with every passing day. The ambience of the
room
is filthy. Once I acquired the keys for the
room
from the accommodation officer, I took my time to ensure the
room
is clean. A couple of days later I started sensing a nauseating and unpleasant stink around the
room
.
This
is making me feel blue and I'
m
finding it tough to cope up with my thesis work. I'
m
unable to figure out the reason and where
this
smell comes from. But, I presume it is coming through the service area beside my windows inside the
room
. Unfortunately, the windows are half broken and it is not in a functioning condition.
Besides
the stink, the broken window adds more misery to my stay, because of the bad weather that prevails. I have been having an unpleasant stay here in the college
room
starting day one. I
thus
kindly request you to address
this
scenario, by fixing the window, which will stop the stink from entering the space and will help me keep away from feeling a bit under the weather. Thank You, Yours sincerely, John
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