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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter: • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job

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Dear Sir and Madam, I saw the advert that you put up in the newspaper to teach your
children
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Burmese
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the Burmese
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 language and I would like to take up
this
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 job
,
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 if it is still available. My name is Thida and I was born and raised in Burma. After my high school study, I left for Australia and currently studying
in
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 the University of Sydney.
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 to the fact that Burmese is my native language, I have experience in teaching
children
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. As I love teaching, I worked part-time in a tuition centre to teach
children
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.
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, as I have been living in Australia for about three years now, I am fluent in English. I believe that I am suitable for
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 job for these reasons. I can
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 babysit them after the teaching session if both of you are away, at an additional cost. I love
children
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 and enjoy playing with them. I used to babysit my nephew for half a year when I was in Burma. As I am free on the weekends, I would like to earn extra to save up for my master degree.
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, I would really appreciate it if you could offer
this
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 job to me. I will ensure that your
children
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 enjoy learning my native language and spending time with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,
Thida
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • TESOL certification
  • Experience in teaching children
  • Knowledge of Australian culture
  • Passion for language education
  • Flexible and adaptable
  • Design customized lesson plans
  • Patient and understanding
  • Strong communication skills
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Participate in family activities
  • Enthusiasm for cultural exchange
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