It is to expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on bhuilding modern buildings instead. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

Reconstructing old apartments can have
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big-budget
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.
Instead
of it, spending
money
on a new building will be better. I absolutely agree with
this
point of view, as
i
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believe that putting
money
on new things would be
better
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a better
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investment
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in
a
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long term, while it will
also
a huge contribution to the appearance.
First
of all, expanding
budget
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for current
buildings
will be
better
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a better
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investment
on
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real
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estate
branch
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in the future. It can be
endurabe
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endurable
durable
for any natural disaster in a long term than restored old
buildings
.
For example
, dust, raining and snowing or other natural events weakened
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age of every
blocks
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of the house.
Therefore
,
although
, it appears that reconstructing previous houses provides
possibility
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the possibility
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to keep every historic event.
Furthermore
, modern
buildings
can make
look
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of the street more convenient.
This
is because the designers and
urban-planners
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put
much
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efforts
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for
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their work and it is
essential
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part of
economic
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the economic
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and social branches of the country.
For instance
,
majority
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of tourists attract the latest modern city
buildings
and entertainments in it, suggested that the national tourism association of Korea. While there is no doubt about the value of old, classical
buildings
, it is clear that spending budget for
new
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the new
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modern
building
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buildings
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will be the best
investment
for a long time as a real estate. In conclusion, It is illogical that putting
money
on older houses would be a good
investment
. To suggest that, spending
money
on new houses have more longevity than older ones, and it is better for street appearance both citizens and society. I highly recommend that contributing the latest
buildings
can have many more strengths than restoring old ones.
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