It is to expensive to look after and repair old buildings. This money should be spent on bhuilding modern buildings instead. To what extent do u agree or disagree?

Reconstructing old apartments can have

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big-budget

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big budget

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.

Instead

of it, spending

money

on a new building will be better. I absolutely agree with

this

point of view, as

i

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believe that putting

money

on new things would be

better

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a better

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investment

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in

a

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long term, while it will

also

a huge contribution to the appearance.

First

of all, expanding

budget

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the budget

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for current

buildings

will be

better

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a better

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investment

on

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real

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the real

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estate

branch

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in the future. It can be

endurabe

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endurable

durable

for any natural disaster in a long term than restored old

buildings

.

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, dust, raining and snowing or other natural events weakened

consuming

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age of every

blocks

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of the house.

Therefore

,

although

, it appears that reconstructing previous houses provides

possibility

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the possibility

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to keep every historic event.

Furthermore

, modern

buildings

can make

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the look

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of the street more convenient.

This

is because the designers and

urban-planners

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urban planners

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put

much

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efforts

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for

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their work and it is

essential

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an essential

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part of

economic

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the economic

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and social branches of the country.

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,

majority

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of tourists attract the latest modern city

buildings

and entertainments in it, suggested that the national tourism association of Korea. While there is no doubt about the value of old, classical

buildings

, it is clear that spending budget for

new

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the new

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modern

building

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buildings

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will be the best

investment

for a long time as a real estate. In conclusion, It is illogical that putting

money

on older houses would be a good

investment

. To suggest that, spending

money

on new houses have more longevity than older ones, and it is better for street appearance both citizens and society. I highly recommend that contributing the latest

buildings

can have many more strengths than restoring old ones.