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Living in big cities is bad for people's health. What extend do you agree and disagree?

#cities #people #health
In the present scenario, everyone has a dream to live in big
cities
.
Although
, it is sometimes thought
people
 have more
health
 issues to live in the metropolitan areas. In my opinion, I considered that living in big
cities
 have both positives and
negatives
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 effects on
people
's
health
. There are several reasons why
people
 are getting more
health
 problems while they are living in urban areas. The
first
 and foremost important thing is that increasing pollution. There is too much traffic congestion in a city because of the
raising
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 use of personal vehicles.
In addition
,
cities
 do not have more trees to keep air pollution
in
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 control.
Moreover
, most of the trees
cut
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 down to construct tall buildings.
Therefore
,
people
 can not get fresh air. Another point to consider living in
cities
 is not good for human's
health
 means expanding industries. There are many factories in
cities
 that are emitting toxic gases from their chimneys.
For instance
, in one survey has conducted in the Uk, toxic gases are terrible for human's
health
 and they can be prevented from
breathe
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,
people
 may have died because of breathing problems.
Hence
,
people
 would have various detrimental diseases.
On the other hand
,
people
 have many options to fit their
health
 when they are living in urban areas.
Firstly
, there are many gyms available and
people
 go on
a
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regular
basies
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basis
 over there.
Secondly
, some
people
 are doing morning
walk
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 and
exercies
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exercises
exercise
 to keep
them
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themselves
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 healthy.
Finally
, they may have
good
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 diet. In conclusion, the life expectancy is less in
cities
 as
people
 are affected by numerous diseases, but there are some ways to live
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a
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as
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 healthy life and it should not neglect.
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