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If people go to live in another country they should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A foreigner should adhere to the dictates and rules of the domain.
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 their dos and don'ts, which is enshrined in how they live. I actually agree that immigrants should follow the rule laid down by the native.
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 their do's and don'ts.
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 how they live and work.
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, they could have a generic
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greeting, which if
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 not done by
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people
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 from another place,
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could be offensive. So it is imperative to follow the set rules
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, locals of a community have sets of beliefs, which have been handed over to them from their ancestors. So having these rules violated by foreigners will not go down well with the owners of the land. In all, every community have their standard laws and guide which is believed to be adhered to by
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 visiting.
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peaceful coexistence between people, I totally agree that the tenents and guides of the locality should be followed by visitors
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