Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,several public thinking that free social
service
ought to be
mandatory
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point of highschool projects
such
like
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helping for clean the surroundings,extent the relationship with neighbours or train child about games.I
am strongly agree
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with
this
statement since it
improve
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helping
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the helping
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mentality of
students
.
Firstly
,public
service
functions
raising
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students
mental ability to understand that how to
behaive
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behave
to others since it
increase
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supporting power in their mind and make them stronger.
In addition
,
students
get a proper vision about the social
service
since school
level
which
also
make
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them successful in
thier
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their
the
future.
For example
, in India,all school has
implimented
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implemented
this
facility from the primary schools and it
mandatory
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to do
service
for society
atleast
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at least
one day
in
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a month.
Secondly
,
this
system
empower
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the
students
to grab knowledge to
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with their neighbours as
friendly
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.
Moreover
, another feature of
this
system
make
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them
broad minded
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persons in future life.
Service
is not only a lesson can study from a book but
also
can gain from own experience,
therefore
this
would be mandatory to teach
students
from the base
level
.
This
can makeup them
to
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come forward to teach to poor
peple
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people
without
charge
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any fees.
For instance
,in Kerala, some adults have started
non profit
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organaizations
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organizations
for poor
students
to teach lessons
in
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various
level
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levels
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such
as games,
library
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libraries
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,
tution
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tuition
. In conclusion,the government must take
initiate
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to
impliment
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implement
this
system from the school
level
as
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strictly.A good student can be a good
proffessional
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professional
in
job
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the job
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but a good social supporter become
a
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famous in public
interms
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in terms
of they provided
service
for society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compulsory
  • high school programmes
  • unpaid community service
  • charity
  • improving the neighbourhood
  • teaching sports
  • sense of responsibility
  • empathy
  • broader perspective
  • societal issues
  • college applications
  • job applications
  • positive impact
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