Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes( for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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helping

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mentality of

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students

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mental ability to understand that how to

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to others since it

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supporting power in their mind and make them stronger.

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students

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get a proper vision about the social

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since school

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them successful in

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facility from the primary schools and it

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to do

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for society

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a month.

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persons in future life.

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would be mandatory to teach

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strictly.A good student can be a good

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professional

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but a good social supporter become

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famous in public

interms

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in terms

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for society.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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societal issues
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