All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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it is important that schools teach content that relates to students universe and can ba
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For example
personal finance, first
aid, sex education, basic constitutional law, history and english
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Nonetheless
, the world is changing rapidly and it is becaming
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specific
For example
self-study, self-dicipline
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discipline
in other words
, soft skills in general. I believe that is
the best way to go considering that the kids from today will probably have several careers during their life and will need to be constantly adapting and reinventing themselves.Submitted by dricaribeiro83 on
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