Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. do you agree or disagree? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Nowadays, more and more individuals prefer to watch

movies

which are produced in other

countries

rather than films which are produced in the local

countries

. I agree with

this

view because

people

who try to learn a foreign language or other culture prefer to watch foreign

movies

, as well as, I strongly believe that authorities should allocate

money

from the budget from film industries because earn more

money

and introduce their morals to other

people

. On the one hand, it is undeniable that many individuals want to watch foreign

movies

due to

improve

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improving

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their language skills.

For example

, if you want to start learning the English language, probably your teacher will recommend watching

movies

in English because they help to improve your listening skills.

Moreover

, some who cannot travel to other

countries

because of work or

money

, try to learn many things about other

countries

by watching films which are produced in these

countries

As a result

, watching foreign

movies

can be useful for

this

purpose.

On the other hand

, it is undeniable that many

countries

and companies earn more

money

from the film industry and it is no secret that the film industry is not developed in some

countries

and if these

countries

’ governments allocate more

money

from the budget, probably they will earn more

money

as well.

Moreover

movies

are the best way for introducing own traditions and places to other

people

This

means that many

people

can learn about these

countries

by watching these

movies

and it is no secret that they can be potential tourists and they will give benefits in future.

Consequently

, funding local

movies

industries probably can offer more and more advantages. In conclusion, I agree that foreign

movies

becoming more popular because they offer many knowledge and governments can take many benefits from the movie industry.

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