In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, people are calling into question

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stimulating

children

to be more hard-working and being more successful in their life.

Although

there are a number of drawbacks involved with

this

belief, the benefits accruing to people who are in their childhood are by no means negligible. On the plus side, the advantages of deriving

children

to work hard can be manifold.

To begin

with, it would bring about increasing the likelihood of learning in the future by allocating plenty of time to various activities.

As a result

,

this

is highly likely to stimulate

children

to be

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constructive and more aware

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who might bear a proper level of well-being.

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, a child encouraged to do vigorous

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in their childhood, are more likely to be

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well-known

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in their adulthood.

Furthermore

, it can lead to

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a homogenous and unified society that have

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unemployed individuals because they always do their best to find a proper occupation opportunity.

However

, the downside can be ignored.

First

of all, placing a premium on working is bound to result in being more isolated and having

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lifestyle.

Consequently

,

this

might trigger obesity and chronic diseases like depression, back pain and etc.

Moreover

, some studies have shown that forcing

children

to

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hard

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more likely to be

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about other activities.

For example

, if students are driven to study a subject

that is

not their desire about

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a day, they will probably be angry about all fields of study generally because of compulsory studying. In

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, advising

children

to be more hardworking can be both rewarding and problematic simultaneously. While bringing about more productivity and more success in their future, it can lead to

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overweight and

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other tasks to do.