Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and Techology are more important than History.

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It is argued by some thatو nowadays, with exciting subjects like Science and Technology there is no space for other subjects
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as History; Whilst,many believe that it is still one of the most important parts of being educated. I am in favour of still regarding History as one of the serious topics because it has an efficient role in different sectors
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as trade. Let's start by taking into consideration the viewpoint of paying more attention to other sections
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as Science and so on .
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it is undeniable that these subjects allow us to make more progress in our future life,we have to regard that not everybody is thinking about working in these kinds of, fields.
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, we cannot consider the whole community as one person and make decisions due to his or her particular personality.These days,there are people, who are still more interested in historical and other fields.
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,you have to take into account the positive and effective role that past played in our trade sector.By knowing about other countries cultures and histories,you can focus on exporting and providing the items they need;
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of just focusing on selling local products. What I mean by
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is that when you know
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the country faced a war that made it lose part of its agricultural areas during the
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decade, you can provide and meet its needs by exporting particular goods to the country. In conclusion, having looked at both sides,
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,these days we need to broaden our knowledge about technology and new gadgets in order to achieve more success in our life, I believe that History can
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help us in different parts. So we have to pay more attention to it unless we will lose the chance and opportunity it provides.
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