In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

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With the development of technology and
economy
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, it is quite common these days for
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worldwide in many countries to have
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a higher
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expectancy
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of
life
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. The trend suggests the progress of
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society.
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, at the same
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, there is no doubt that it will result in
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social problems. The obvious argument in its favour is that
people
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have more
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to achieve their dreams to lead to a happy
life
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. Having been improved with the help of scientific advances, medical services contributed to a longer
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expectancy
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in the
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century.
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, Human beings have more
opportunity
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and
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to improve their capabilities and to learn different kinds of skills. That would enrich their
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life
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.
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,
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can share their wonderful
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with their loved ones. It is one of the most wonderful things in
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life
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.
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,
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could spend more
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with their parents, partners and children.
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,
people
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have more
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to reflect on themselves and think
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meaning of
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, we should not neglect that if the
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expectancy
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becomes higher and higher, the earth will face various problems.
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of all, with the higher
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of
life
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,
population
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the population
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will explode and it will likely
to
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cause a food crisis and a lack of natural
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resources
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, which break
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balance among the
life
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of human beings.
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, another factor we must consider is the pollution of
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the environment
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. It is inevitable when
people
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lack the awareness of
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the protection
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of
environment
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the environment
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. To conclude in fact, higher
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expectancy
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does contribute to the development of
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technology and society. In order to give our descendants a clean and beautiful surrounding to
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, we should pay attention to different kinds of aspects and protect our planet
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • demographics
  • societal development
  • healthcare system
  • pension funds
  • multigenerational
  • workforce
  • economic sustainability
  • intergenerational inequality
  • longevity
  • proactive policy
  • geriatrics
  • senior citizens
  • ageing population
  • fertility rates
  • dependency ratio
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