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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #person’s #culture #character #choice #clothes
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Many
people
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 believe that person's attitudes and culture reveal by their
outfits
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. Cloth is the shadow of someone's inner quality and environment where they grew up.
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, could we be able to totally agree or disagree with that statement?
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, I will agree with the above statement to some extent and will elaborate on it with appropriate examples to explain
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. On the one hand,
usually
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 society judges someone from their
outfits
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, since, their
first
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 sight is these. Due to the fact,
people
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 should wear convenient
clothes
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 according to the event in which they participate.
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, when individuals go for an interview, the interviewer reveals their inner qualities from
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 and accessories.
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,
people
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 should wear clean and tidy
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 for these types of professional events of their lives
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 they lose vital opportunities.
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, there are numerous traditional costumes in the world, as
people
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 tend to judge their cultures according to their traditional
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. To illustrate, when an individual wear a white sarong and shirt can assume he is a Sri Lankan or Indian.
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, if a woman wears a Kimono,
people
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 definitely know, she belongs to Japan.
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, at the present, there is a trend that wealthy
people
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's reputation is considered by their luxury
outfits
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.
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, they are keen to buy the latest vivid
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 from branded manufacturers
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 as GUCCI and Polo.
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,
people
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 deduce behaviours and unique values from their dress. In conclusion, society can measure a person's characteristics and standards from their choice of
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 to some extent. Even so, when
people
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 judge someone's inner qualities, they couldn't always put their faith in
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. Because
people
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 are not made by
clothes
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 and
people
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 make
clothes
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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