You have recently discovered that a product you particularly like, and often purchase, will no longer be produced. You have decided to write a letter to the company to object to the discontinuation of this item: •what the product is and why you like it so much •how its removal from production will affect you •what you would like the company to do as an alternative
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter in context to Correct article usage
the decesion
decesion
of discontinuation of manufacturing of the Confident Hydrolic Dental Chairs ZX 1 by the company. I am a dentist by profession. I have been using Correct your spelling
decision
this
product for the last
ten years, because of
the cost of operating is very reasonable. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, it is power efficient too, because it uses Correct article usage
a hydrolic
hydrolic
lift, which is operated by foot.
There are a few things, which are bothering me. Correct your spelling
hydraulic
Firstly
, how will I get spare parts, because without them machine
will not work in Correct article usage
the machine
desired
manner and after-market spare parts are not of good quality. Change the article
the desired
Moreover
, they are available at higher prices.
I would like to urge you to kindly do
not stop Unnecessary verb
apply
production
line, which Add an article
the production
make
spare parts. Because, it will enable the company customers, which use Change the verb form
makes
this
model to use it without any hesitation. I hope you will look into the matter personally and I am looking forward to hearing from you on this
.
Yours faithfully,
JatinderSubmitted by mrsdns on
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coherence cohesion
To enhance logical structure, consider separating each main point into distinct paragraphs. This will help in conveying your message more clearly.
task achievement
Make sure to provide a more detailed explanation of how the product's removal will impact your dental practice specifically, to strengthen your argument.
task achievement
The letter has a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for communication with a company.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used and contribute to a formal tone.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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