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Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others agree that they must get homework everyday  in order to be successful at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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There is a notion that
students
 should be given
homework
 on a daily basis in order to be successful in their studies. Others believe that
homework
 is not necessary.
This
 essay with discuss the debate and explain why
homework
 is important but should not be given every day.
Homework
 assists in understanding and remembering the material covered in class. The amount of
time
 that teacher spends explaining a certain subject is limited,
thus
 some
students
 might be unable to comprehend it well. While doing the
homework
 children need to review the topic and complete the exercises.
As a result
, they devote more
time
 learning the subject, which will help them to understand it better.
On the other hand
, having to do
homework
 for several classes on a daily basis will leave no
time
 for other activities. Adolescents are high-energy individuals who do not wish to devote all their
time
 studying. They need
time
 to play sports, socialize with friends and help parents with household duties. Children may feel pressured if they have too much
homework
, and might not study at all. There have been many examples of
students
 being unable to study in school due to the difficulty of the program and dropping out. I believe that
homework
 should be assigned only to benefit the studies of the
students
 and in limited amounts, perhaps 2-3 times a week.
This
 way,
students
 will still be doing their assignments, but they will have
time
 for other activities as well. To summarize, while
homework
 might help
students
 to perform better in school, it should not be given daily. Children should be able to engage in activities other than schoolwork.
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