Write a letter to invite a famous person to give a speech at a meeting in your youth club. In your letter, you should: -introduce your club -explain why you want to invite him/her -tell him/her about the arrangement for the meeting

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Dear

Mr.

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John, I, the undersigned, am a chairman of a social club named "Young Minds" that, we run for the young crowd in and around

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area

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. Our club focuses on

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development of today's youth by inviting respected speakers who have done some remarkable work in their area of expertise.

Now a days

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, we see many cases of mental illness

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among

younger children

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of increased expectations and stress. We have read your articles and attended a few sessions delivered by you on developing mental health. We would like to make

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use of your experience in

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field. We expect to have your sessions for a duration of one to two hours,

month. If you agree to do

this

for us, we shall make necessary arrangements for the seminar which includes pick up and drop facility for you, the handouts for the gathering and

also

for lunch post the lecture, for all the attendees. Considering the limited time on hand, looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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sincerely, Omkar

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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