It is known to all that technological and scientific advances have made more remarkable changes to the range and quality of our food. Some people regard it as an improvement, while others believe that the difference is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Birds
have many unique design features that enable them to perform
such
amazing feats of endurance. They are equipped with lightweight, hollow bones, intricately designed feathers providing both lift and thrust for rapid flight, navigation systems superior to any that man has developed, and an ingenious heat conserving design that, among other things, concentrates all blood circulation beneath layers of warm, waterproof plumage, leaving them fit to face life in the harshest of climates. Their respiratory systems have performed efficiently during sustained flights at altitude, so they have a method of extracting oxygen from their lungs that far exceeds that of any other animal. During the later stages of the summer breeding season, when
food
is plentiful, their bodies accumulate multiple layers of fat to provide sufficient energy for their long migratory flights. B The fundamental reason
birds
migrate is to find adequate
food
during the
winter
months when it is in short supply. It applies to
birds
that breed in the temperate and arctic regions of the Northern Hemisphere, where
food
is abundant during the short growing season. Many
species
can tolerate cold temperatures if
food
is plentiful, but when
food
is unavailable, they must migrate;
however
, intriguing questions remain. C
One
puzzling fact is that many
birds
journey much
further
than necessary to find
food
and good
weather
. Nobody knows,
for instance
, why British swallows, which could presumably survive equally well if they spent the
winter
in equatorial Africa,
instead
of flying several thousands of miles
further
to their preferred
winter
home in South Africa cape province. Another mystery involves the massive migrations performed by arctic terns and mudflat-feeding shorebirds that breed close to polar regions in general; the
further
north a migrant
species
Breeds, the
further
south it spends the
winter
. For artic terns,
this
necessitates an annual round trip of 25000 miles. Yet en route to their final destination in far-flung southern latitudes, all these individuals overfly other areas of seemingly suitable habitat spanning two hemispheres. While we may not fully understand
birds
’ reasons for going to particular places, we can marvel at their feats. D
One
of the greatest mysteries is how young
birds
find traditional wintering areas without parental guidance. Very few adults migrate with juveniles in tow, and youngers may even have little or no clue about their parents’ appearance. A familiar example is a cuckoo, which lays its eggs in another
species
nest and never reencounters its young. It is mind-boggling to consider that, once raised by its host
species
, the young cuckoo makes its way to ancestral wintering grounds in the tropics before returning single-handedly to northern Europe the
next
season to seek out a mate among its kind. The obvious implication is that it inherits from its parents an inbuilt route map and direction-finding capability, as well as a mental image of what another cuckoo looks like. Yet nobody has the slightest idea as to how
this
is possible. E Mounting evidence has confirmed that
birds
use the positions of the sun and stars to obtain compass directions. They
also
seem to detect the earth’s magnetic field, probably due to having minute crystals of magnetite in the region of the brain.
However
, accurate navigation
also
requires an awareness of position and time, especially when lost. Experiments have shown that after being taken thousands of miles over an unfamiliar landmass,
birds
can still return rapidly to nest sites.
Such
phenomenal power is the product of computing several sophisticated cues, including a genetic map of the
night
sky and the pull of the earth’s magnetic fields. How the
birds
use their ‘instruments’ remains unknown, but
one
thing is clear: they see the world with a superior sensory perception to ours. Most small
birds
migrate at
night
and take their direction from the position of the setting sun.
However
, seeing the sun go down, they
also
seem to know the plane of polarized light caused by it, which calibrates their compass. Travelling at
night
provides other benefits. Daytime predators are avoided, and the danger of dehydration due to flying for long periods in warm, sunlit skies is reduced.
Furthermore
, at
night
the air is generally calm and less turbulent and conducive to sustained, stable flight. F
Nevertheless
, all journeys involve considerable risk. And part of the skill in arriving
safety
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is setting off at the right time.
This
means accurate
weather
forecasting and utilizing favourable winds.
Birds
are adept at both, and, in the laboratory test, some have been shown to detect the minute difference in barometric pressure between the floor and ceiling of a room. Often
birds
react to
weather
changes before there is any visible sign of them. At the onset of a cold snap, Lapwings, which feed on grassland, flee west from the Netherlands to the British isles, France and Spain. When the ground surface freezes, the
birds
could starve. Yet they return to holland ahead of a thaw, their arrival linked to a pressure change presaging an improvement in the
weather
. G In
one
instance, a welsh Manx shearwater carried to American and released was back in its burrow on Stockholm island, off the Pembrokeshire coast,
one
day before a letter announcing its release!
Conversely
, each autumn, a small number of North American
birds
are blown across the Atlantic by fast-moving westerly tailwinds. Not only do they arrive safely in Europe, but based on ringing evidence, some make it back to North America the following spring, after probably spending the
winter
with European migrants in sunny African climes.
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