write an essay presenting the pros and cons of teens using social media

Social
media
nowadays is so popular and has grown so much over the course of the
last
years. Now everybody is using social
media
every day, some people even social
media
their
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work space
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workspace
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. Basically, every
teenagers
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teenager
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is using social
media
apps
such
ass
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as
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Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, Snapchat or
others
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social
media
is a big part of their day. They spend
considerable
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part of their lives interacting with each other through social
media
. We know that
,
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social
media
has some advantages and disadvantages for the users. It
also
can give good or bad effects on society. Social
media
has a lot of advantages,
such
as you can know pretty much everything that’s happening in the
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in less than 20 to 30 mins. But with that comes social
media
users that are posting wrong information about what they can find, and not only teenagers but adults believe what they say. If we take
the
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advantages
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of
this
, people can know a lot of good information, learn new things, exchange ideas and
helps
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hone their networking skills. Social
media
presents
many
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good information. We
also
can solve our homework or questions for our assignments in school, college or at work.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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